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May 20th, 2011, 7:12 pm

I'm such a bad author =_=

I think I'm gonna put together an alternative beginning for this doujinshi...something that eventually leads up to the same events that are happening in Ch7+...but something that doesn't drag on for a thousand years like Ch1-6.

In part, because the art still bothers the crap out of me, and also because I really think I can do a much better job in a much shorter period of time. Characterizations are a bit off (especially Ichigo in some areas, I think.) So...yeah...gonna do that...


u_queen, May 20th, 2011, 9:01 pm

Well, the beginning seems fine to me. The first conversation between Orihime and Ulquiorra is was seems long. But charactereization, in my opinion, it's just perfect.

Rip the Hunter, May 20th, 2011, 9:50 pm

Yeah, the dialogue between Ulqui and Ori is really long-winded...people give me grief about her lashing out at Ichigo at the start though. I may feel her outburst is justified, but no one else does =_= Folks say Ichigo is too closed-minded when he goes after Ulquiorra, too...

Rip the Hunter, May 21st, 2011, 4:12 am

Argh...maybe I can't redo the beginning as easily as I thought. It seems too rushed to get to the same conclusion. I guess I'll just leave it be ._.

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